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Detecting a massive warp signature on long range sensors the Charon moves to investigate and discovers the source to be a planet moving at warp 1.5. Amazed by the scene the Commodore decides to have the Charon move in for a closer look. As the Charon moves into an orbital pattern an optical transmission from the planet is detected.

After using the deflector dish to receive the transmission they discover that the planet is inhabited by a species called the ‘Lyrillians.’ The head of Lyrillians identifies himself as the Grand Proctor Ohoni. The grand proctor asks if the ‘teachers’ send the Charon to their planet. Shiarrael informs him that they were not sent by the ‘teachers’ and the grand proctor invites the crew to the planet for a face to face meeting. The commodore agrees to the request. However, something doesn’t feel right about the situation. Commander Ceer mentions the use of a primitive form of optical communication. ‘How can a species advanced enough to move a planet at warp not have subspace communication available?’

Are the Lyrillians hiding something from the crew of the Charon and who are these ‘teachers’ the grand proctor mentioned?

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+Detecting a massive warp signature on long range sensors the Charon moves to investigate and discovers the source to be a planet moving at warp 1.5.  Amazed by the scene the Commodore decides to have the Charon move in for a closer look.  As the Charon moves into an orbital pattern an optical transmission from the planet is detected.
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+After using the deflector dish to receive the transmission they discover that the planet is inhabited by a species called the ‘Lyrillians.’  The head of Lyrillians identifies himself as the Grand Proctor Ohoni.  The grand proctor asks if the ‘teachers’ send the Charon to their planet.  Shiarrael informs him that they were not sent by the ‘teachers’ and the grand proctor invites the crew to the planet for a face to face meeting.  The commodore agrees to the request.  However, something doesn’t feel right about the situation.  Commander Ceer mentions the use of a primitive form of optical communication.  ‘How can a species advanced enough to move a planet at warp not have subspace communication available?’
-Gerlan ran his fingers over the cold control unit.  Specks of dust were beginning to accumulate on the edges of the gray metallic panel.  He visually checked every switch seeing no need to physically test them.  Behind him Kuna was checking the visual gauges “are they working properly?”
+Are the Lyrillians hiding something from the crew of the Charon and who are these ‘teachers’ the grand proctor mentioned?
-“They are fine.”  Kuna smiled.  Leaning over to check the control mechanisms she used a free hand to drape her long red hair across her back “I don’t see any visible errors.  Let’s return to the control station.”
-“Good idea.”  Gerlin smiled glad that there weren’t any problems to deal with today.  He followed Kuna into the control room where the other five great technicians were keeping their eyes on the Maker’s displays.  “Everything is fine.”  Gerlin announced to the room and they all nodded.
-Taking his own seat Gerlin turned his attention to the blackness of space.  The Maker’s control periphery was just a giant dome encased in transparent metal giving all the technicians and any visitors a panoramic view.  Behind them was the azure glow of Lyrila and in front of them the black expanse of space.  Only a few stars dotted the expanse.
-Suddenly an alarm sounded.  Gerlin and the other technicians jumped out of their seats startled by the strange noise.  “What is it?!”  Gerlin asked but his question was only an echo of the other technicians.
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